Blog – Page 9 – Comma Comma

A simple moment  
And sullen toon. 
The ghastly face 
Of him the loon. 
 
In midst of the crowd  
Or aside by the bar 
That ludicrous voice 
Both near side and far. 

A carnival setting 
At night unlike most 
Where each little child  
is totally engrossed. 

There are no adults. 
Not a single in sight. 
Now there is a way 
we can thicken our plight.  

A place without rules 
where life is a joke 
and everyone's heard 
without having spoken. 

Imagine the problems 
of a world like that then 
you're free to be you 
but who'd you be then?

I’m still here loving you

A slowly taken step
A widely made mistake
A backbreaking discovery
Leaving pain in its wake.

A moment come and gone
A one you’d hoped to stay
But who on earth could tell
What’d happen on that day?

A child lain to rest
And mother left to live
But really what did God expect
When he took all she could give?

Somewhere past this life
A tiny hand does rest
Upon that mothers bowed back
Instead of on her chest.